The Editor moves to Megalopolis to add the powerful Ultress to his harem, but events quickly spiral out of his control, and he learns the consequences of his actions. Some violence, lots of buildup, then lots of sex and growth at the end. Enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 5.00
Tib
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Loved it, and wish you had written more stories.
pleasure
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked it very much !
Please continue...
gemile
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really liked this story a lot as a follow up to the original. Would have liked a little more description on the growth scene(s). Overall a really well done story!
Adama
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the double turnabout in the plot. Takes it away from the standard evil mind-controller story (which is where part 1 seemed to be heading) and makes it more likable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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