Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.71
- BE: 3.14
- Characters: 3.57
- Technical: 3.29
Thag13
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
its a good story but not a great one. but the author has potential
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Interesting story. I would have liked more description of each breast growth sequence. You should have them drink individually, and extend the story.
The names while original were a little too difficult for me. Keep at it.
pillager
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I look forward to more stories in the impending strange eons.
muscle god
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
MissanH
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
m0o
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
Is the author a Jejemon? fix the title.. correct the spelling.. lol..
- Jejebusters
Kisame17
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'm kind of disappointed that this story ended. It was too short and stopped right at the exciting parts. I just hope that there is more to come from this tale.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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