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The Overflowing Bra

Summer at a Zoo
A series of events leads to some fun for two college students at the zoo that they work at.
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that one guy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

seriously, save the file as something more open. Even a txt would be better

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 1

the story is good and the BE, but MAN! you have got to do something on that filetype.... it was close to impossible to find the converter to help in opening the file!

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1


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