The second story of my new "Art of Witchery" series(a link to the first can be found in this one). Susan is subjected to a berry transformation that's a little different from the usual blueberries.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.50
Gojira
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I thought this was original and sexy fun!
Bahamad
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Nicely done. The return and over-application of the trigger was a welcome approach to the series. The story seems to follow a similar vein as others you've written in the series, and is probably the most interesting/exciting you've written behind the Jeannie stories.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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