What would happen if the Hadron Collider actually changed reality?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
The Veeb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really like the idea. It's TG, but not in the sense of "We're changing, check this out." more "Wow it's like I've always been a girl here, this is neat." I like the spin you took on the Hadron Collider for sexy sake!
Beetlebomb
Overall= 1, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just couldn't look past the Sex changing thing. Overall your grammar is perfect, your character development was awsome, and your story development was practically flawless.
I only wish this didn't contain any trans gender, since I'm a gigantic fan of alternate/changing reality stories.
B
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just wish the story was longer. Perhaps follow the couple more and instead of having a totally separate story have one couple meet the other... Maybe the scientists Fix it, but they are still stuck that way and how they cope with that. Thanks again. Look forward to reading future stories...
Russian Judge
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Obviously, there was good BE in this story, but we only saw one example of it. If there are additional chapters, there should be more examples of BE, and female-to-male transition. (Newly transformed men should be obsessed by the breasts they no longer have.) It's clear that the Hadron effect has made the world more obvious and open about sex, and that should also be demonstrated in future installments.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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