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A ship's hand and a young noblewoman are castaway on an island with a remarkable fruit. (Very long)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.94
- BE: 4.89
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.89
thegiddywittytittykittybitty
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved everymoment of it. Romantic and erotic all in one. If this were a published book, I would buy 2 copies.
ThreePointOneFour
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
GNC Railway
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a wonderful story. The tale is fun, the characters are interesting and the romantic nature of the entire tales makes if great to read.
I think the style of the story brings back fond memories of the Victorian Erotic Stories such as "The Pearl" among others.
I am looking forwad to reading the sequels to this story. Please continue!!!! I even enjoyed reading the other comments.
Chezwick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely wonderful. I loved the Victorian aesthetic as well as that of the island. Also, the illustrations are beyond excellent; is there a place where one can see more? Please, keep on writing and drawing.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The writing quality set this above most other stories I've read, obviously a labor of love with plenty of effort put into it. Content was such a turn on, please continue to write as you have an obvious special talent. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Everything
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Everything was amazing. There's pretty much nothing else I can say.
Hotstuff
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Like all your writing. You created a wonderfully idealic world and made the most of it.
Daddio
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, a whole slew of good stories coming out lately. This tops them all though. My only complaint is that the BE could use more detailed description. But that's it.
Donut
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Ferty
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow.
Simply, wow.
This was a fantastic story in every sense of the word. I have a feeling that this will be one of those stories in the archive that I specifically return to even years from now.
Bravo!
Van
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was, by far, the best story I have ever read. You sir, are an erotic genius, and this captured my attention from the first line till the end. This story is absolutely perfect. I would seriously consider publishing this, if you haven't already.
anony
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Brilliant! You capture the voice of the lead fantastically well, never once dropping out of the Victorian style.
Kowalski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
zin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
According to your 'profile' here it's been four years since you've submitted a story and let me be the first -and definitely not the last- to say those four years were good to you. I can't even put it into words how amazing this story was.
I can honestly say I've never ready a story this tasteful despite being erotic in nature, you truly have a God given talent.
My only gripe was the beginning of the story had a wee bit of redundant description, but if I were to say this detracted from the overall quality -and my overall enjoyment- of the story it would be a boldface lie.
I'm sure you already know how good of a writer you are, so I'll end this review on a less serious note: I suddenly have a taste for eggs.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Absolutely wonderful story, even in its erotic nature. Though your use of notepad affected the technical quality somewhat, I really don't care. Fantastic story!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was absolutely wonderful. The only story I've ever felt strongly enough to comment. Wonderful descriptions, intelligent writing; a masterpiece.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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