Becky just wants to keep the Presidency of her local Debate Club. Too bad Fiona wants the same prize. And the girl seems to be willing to do whatever it takes to win. And, oh, the entire school seems to be transforming into sex-obsessed bimbos with tiny brains and gigantic tits.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.40
- BE: 2.60
- Characters: 3.47
- Technical: 3.40
g-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Iam
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
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Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I thought those CGs looked familiar; they're from Amorous Professor Cherry! With Chieri "Cherry" Hase as Becky, and Mamiko Kanai as Fiona. The pink haired girl in one of the images is Kiyoka Yorii, the only one of the three main girls in the game that isn't a professor.
And in case you're wondering, yes, I have the game's official English website open in another tab; how do you think I got the names?
Schreaver
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please include the source of the pictures. From what hentai CG series are they?
Scrambler_J
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Been trying to download this story since March 6th with no luck. Would like to read it as I've enjoyed your other works on MCStories.
-j-
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I have always loved your stories, and I enjoyed this one…but it wasn’t quite as smooth as your other offerings; and while I like the pictures they weren’t quite in sync with the story…I know you where repurposing them for your own needs, but still it ended up being slightly distracting.
Over all though? Can’t wait for more :-)
Tanap
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
It's a great story, but as many have said before, it's too broken up. Might I suggest page tabs for the pics? As I loved it being in Acrobat. I also agree that for this website it was a bit low on the BE or because of the format that it made it seem that it was.
This would be a great story for the EMCSA. I want to say again, it's a wonderful story with a great attempt at something new.
Gorge
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved the pics and the writing. It needs more BE though. I'd like to see more from you
Boom
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You've got solid writing here. However, this is little other than fictional erotica with BE touched in, and vaguely at that. Were this website not themed towards BE fetishes and its accompanying transformations, I'd give this baby a 5/5. I have yet to mention how much I appreciate the story being uploaded in Acrobat, which may be a personal preference, but it's a much friendlier interface.
ANYWAY. In closing, I also enjoyed the fact that you used pictures to accompany the written descriptions, as opposed to simply parachuting them in to excuse yourself from putting in any effort. I hope to see more material from you, with considerably more growth of course.
aitchbee
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Tried to download the story on both Saturday and Sunday - nothing happened. Please check your story format and links
anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
It's a great idea for a story, ruined by poor execution. I'd love to see a version without the images and strung together a little better.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked the pictures. It went a long way toward descriptions. I also like how the story ends, by bringing us another non-slut to become another slut. I enjoyed it!
Dick Cheney's Heart
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Harl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Heyo
Overall= 1, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Limerick is a fantastic author and this is a fantastic story. That is ruined by awful formatting. Truely, truely shameful.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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