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File includes part 1, slightly rewritten. Thanks for the comments everyone.
In part 1, Mark Stanley inadvertently transforms his nerdy girlfriend into a super-hottie, who then proceeded to break up with him and screw the entire football team. In part 2, heartbroken, Mark meets a new friend and goes on a tropical vacation with his family. “Lovesick, horny, idiotic and magically-powered teen in a tropical resort” fun ensues!
PLEASE comment on this story, and enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.13
- Characters: 4.63
- Technical: 4.13
Psy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Easily one of my favorite erotic stories on the net. When's #3 coming out? I'd love to see how the rest unfolds
afstarli
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Wow. Love this story. Would love to see where its going.
QM
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Awesome! continue the story, please!
Au Goose
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Enjoying this one quite a bit. Keep at it - practice will only improve your craft.
Pion
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
HunkyDory
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Keep it going! Great stuff.
Pleasure4U
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I likes it a lot, I hope that someday he will learn to control this...
Keep them cumming !
gorge
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great story series, can't wait for more!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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