Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.42
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.00
Duuude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Great story! My only negative is the frequent switch from past tense to present tense to past tense. It's distracting.
Please cntinue / finish!
Fat Cat
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I love this story. I only hope you can take the time to finish it. It has been over a year since your last entry and I am still waiting.
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Honestly the best BE story i have read, I really enjoy the non consensual element mixed with lactation. I have read this story time and time again and still enjoy it! I urge to you to continue this story and keep writing, you have good ideas.
pnb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
wheres the rest of the story
egg
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
This wasn't very good, I'm sorry to say. The descriptive focus on "Vicky" and her breasts was nice, but aside from that, the characters all felt like silhouettes. Casey's only defining character traits seem to be "unfortunate victim" and "weak-willed", with everyone else - EVERYONE - being poorly-developed creatures with, again, the sole defining characteristic of being "mean". That makes them all rather disconnected from me, the reader, and that reduces the quality of the experience overall, so please try to develop the characters a bit more next time.
The BE was gradual, and that was a plus. The writing was not satisfactory; several confusing punctuation errors ruined ALL of the dialogue, and the plot was not only thin, but nonsensical and inconsistent. Plot points that seemed to be important were dropped as early as one scene later (quick example: Casey gaining dozens of pounds early on, then a few days later, they're magically gone. What happened?). Please keep Chekhov's Gun in mind.
I would also urge you to work at making the sex scenes more sensual. When I read them, they felt very mechanical; it was as if all of the action was being viewed through a telescope, rather than experienced up close.
Viddaric
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
ooh, ongoing plot! Don't see that NEARLY enough. Anyway, Slow growth is cool. But where's the limit? How big will she get? No one knows! I like the fact that the milk is a drug of sorts. Making the milk have effects on both body and mind would be what I request for future chapters. You are making future chapters, right?
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really liked this story when I first saw it. I've seen it here before though haven't I?
pnb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story wish it did not take six months for chapter
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great to get another well-done chapter; one of my favorites so far!
curious
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Glad to see you continuing this story.
Duuude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I haven't yet read the new chapter, but wanted to thank you for continuing this story. It's one of my favorites!
naminami
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Thank you for the new part of the story, don't stop I really like it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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