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The Overflowing Bra

RLilly
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Rapunzelesque Diaries 01
A new hair stylist writes on his days at work.  His first customer comes in after having cut gum out of her hair.  She leaves with a little more than just a new hairstyle.
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 very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Not bad for a short one, but probably more like a 3. However it'll help balance out the detractor's sorry-ass vote.
 postman
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Wished I could give it a zero. Terrible 
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