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The arrival of a magic scepter turns an unlucky April first into a revenge-minded office fantasy for one young woman.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.20
Tailsko
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A bit of a slow start, but an interesting story and concept! If anything, I'd make things a bit more gradual. The part about the typist was best. However, except for that, a wonderful story!
inflategrow
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Camelman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An excellent story with a slow start; great attention to detail and characterisation. Well done.
BlackWolfe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Haven't read the story all the way through, just had to comment on the intro, which I thought was hilarious!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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