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Megan has trouble controlling her urges when her mother Kathryn starts using a drug called Lactoril.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.85
- BE: 4.38
- Characters: 4.46
- Technical: 4.38
ryan111
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing stuff, only thing I would say to add is more areola descriptions, width, bumps, etc.
Neas
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Freakin awsome waiting axuslly for the next!
Arlytia
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked it! I felt kindred spirits in both characters =)
And I agree, bring on the sequel!
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A good start. I look forward to the next part!
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It was a bit short, but all in all a good story. I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel.
G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very nice work indeed. Had some funny moments "gotta go clean my homework" etc. Maybe just a little slower, don't rush to the big sex scene. Draw it out. Lots of heat though, keep up the good work.
Scooter
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed the story and await the continuing saga of the cousin.
Illmatic
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Simple story of lotion makes breasts swell with milk, but very entertaining! Could have described Kathryn a little more than nice breasts and hot, but my mind filled in the rest. Overall, very well done. Thank you for submitting. You've got some real talent.
laeana
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Awesome story. Would love to see it longer or more drawn out.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You get an A +. Or perhaps that shouldd be a D+! I loved the story! I didn't think I was going to, but then did! Great job, keep writing!
Fahzbehn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
All I have to say is I can't wait to meet Sandy.
HubbleOverTaiwan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really liked the concept and your writing style is really good. However, I'd really like to see something that you write that doesn't involve incest. I'm not knocking any points for the incest in your story as that's just a personal thing on my part, but again, I'd really like to see something without the incest.
Deoxys
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Nicely done, I'd like to see a sequel!
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