The Overflowing Bra

. If you like to read books that relate to you, it dtlniieefy does not mean you are lazy or immature. I think it is important for characters to be, if not relatable, then at least realistic. Some of the best books I've ever read were ones with believable characters. So what I'm saying is, in order to enjoy a book, it doesn't matter if you like or dislike the characters, or even relate to them. You just have to have a basic understanding of where the characters come from and why they do the things that they do.

Good start to a story, keep it going.  Perhaps the author is a non-native English speaker, but seems well versed in slang.  Why?  Grinded: t'ain't no such word, should be ground.
Since I'm reading about cyberboobs, it would seem appropriate to say,
"Thanks for the memories."
"Thanks for the mammaries."
"Thanks for the mammary memories."
"Thanks for the mammaries in memory."
Or something like that...

I liked it, I think you should expand it !
Following chapters could be very interesting...

Nice! Short and sweet...expand your ideas and add more detail next time! So much you could do with this!

I just didn't get in to it...sorry man

Honestly, not your best work, but then again, it was intended to be a short story, no? I have to say however in the defense of the story, that if it was a first chapter, then it was a decent introduction. I rather liked the name, the development and the shock of the character. The description of the expansion and the moment of intimacy in general I believe is lacking but only because of length. Good beginning though.