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The Overflowing Bra

VezRoth
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Being Jeweled
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Jeanette plays a quick game online to pass some time. Who says that gaming isn't good for your figure? A Short story that was posted over at MC Archive. I thought it was worthy of the repost here, and the author gave permission to do so.
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 Jaebird
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Very nice! I would love to see more like this.
 SavageCabbage
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
My favourite type of story! well done, more please!!
 JJMastafunk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
More please! I liked it a LOT!
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