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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Yrba’s Travels Pt. 11 – Oil To The Flames (World of Altaerna, 1200)
Mirca the blond amazon quickly learns that being queen means it’s harder to have fun and careless fornicating, but she’s not one to give up easily, especially if the prize is a tasty girl. Seducing her priest later teaches both that they haven’t seen half of what her body is capable of. When Yrba the witch visits her former pupil weeks later, the cracks in their relationship soon start to grow wider, too — and when one of Mirca’s servants gets too frisky with the giantess’ volatile breasts, Yrba all of a sudden has blood on her hands ... (Pt. 11 of 12, previous parts included)
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Though it was nice to see Yrba getting it on with Patra, I still feel that she and Mirca need each other in many ways. It's nice to see such complexities arising in their relationship. Looking forward to the ending, but sad to see such a great series coming to a close.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

*Squirms* Bah, your evil sir, truly evil. You leave on such a cliffhanger and title for the next chapter, I cannot wait for the final installment. O_O Bah, it's like waiting for a game or book to be released and your sitting outside the doors a day early. Curse your writing expertise sir! On that note, liked the story.

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