The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

PyroWildcat
Short Scene: Hot and Spicy Soup
A short scene based off of a picture by the one and only test-0. Who would have thought that wishing for some soup could cause changes like these?
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 Vural
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2 
Your post has moved the detbae forward. Thanks for sharing!
 anonguy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Best I've read in quite some time.  Description was good throughout.  Keep on writing!
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