An extract from the book "Men In Love" by Nancy Friday, a study and analysis of men's sexual fantasies. This one belongs here.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.17
- Characters: 3.17
- Technical: 3.50
Above Ground Swimming Pools
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Sometimes I also see something like this, but earlier I didn`t pay much attention to this!...
Beachball Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Wish there was more! A LOT more!
Kowalski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thanks for posting this. I owned Men In Love decades ago and this was one of my favorite stories. Probably the first BE I ever read. The book contains some other doozies too.
fourshot
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
great suggestion about opening it in wordpad. Definately made it much easier to read.
ME_DG_UC
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I liked the story and appreciate you posting it here. As for Gopherspace: please think a little before bashing someone. You most likely opened the file in the Notepad Application which does not support formatting. If you had opened it in WordPad or Microsoft Office Word, it would have been perfectly fine and readable.
Gopherspace
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I'm well aware that you didn't write this, but is it too much to ask that you at least proofread and format it properly?
Paragraphs are your friend, as is proper spacing; .txt isn't the prettiest format, and it would've been much better as an rtf or html
On top of that, there were some severe spelling errors and occasionally you just forwent spaces between words entirely (i.e. andhappily.) I'm not so sure on the actual content as I wasn't able to get past the first few sentences. If you're going to take the time to post a story, at least make it presentable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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