The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
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Johnny Bosomseed
"A guy infects women with a special BE formula. Another nice story from Steve Palmer." This is the same story as the other one, only in standard .html format.
Average Scores:
 Odagbsr
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Good quality story, but could have used a little more BE.
 duck
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Nice. Good grammar, simple storyline.... Decent all around.
 mrmookie513
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
i wish reality was as strange as this fiction!
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