The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Johnny Bosomseed
"A guy infects women with a special BE formula. Another nice story from Steve Palmer." This is the same story as the other one, only in standard .html format.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good quality story, but could have used a little more BE.
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nice. Good grammar, simple storyline.... Decent all around.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

i wish reality was as strange as this fiction!

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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