The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Johnny Bosomseed
A guy infects women with a special BE formula. Another nice story from Steve Palmer. (To those who've been commenting and rating, I'm not the author himself, just a fan who wants to share these hard-to-find stories with the community).
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Currently unable to open on my Mac. I am now trying Internet Explorer 5.2 for Mac. This should be in some type of universal file format that is easy to download on multiple platforms. I may change my rating if I am ever able to download.

Russian Judge
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Fairly average for a BE story, but why did you use some weird HTML derivative for publishing - just to throw one picture in? It didn't help the story that much.

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