This part’s a little shorter at 10,000 words, and of course the previous parts are included for your convenience (separate HTML pages with a handy nav index). If you like sword and sorcery, give it a try. Oh yes, and my usual whine: Please comment.
Part 6 - The Road: Yrba the witch and Mirca, her amazonian sidekick, take to the road after Berry's bequest to the surviving girls of Red's cathouse solves their most pressing worries. After their requisite farewell orgy, Mirca tries on one of Berry’s chain mail clothes, only to find that there’s more to it than meets the eye. The traveling couple runs into a gang of thugs with bad news from Red, soon forgets about it (involuntarily), and it seems that six feet six isn't Mirca’s final size yet...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.33
Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great - hope to see more soon.
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
That "fond farewell" that the ladies gave each other was beautiful. This story just gets better and better!
Bahamad
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Well done. The story certainly flowed along, and wrapped up loose ends surrounding the girls from the house.
The detailed descriptions flow well, and the taunting of previous erotic actions without actually descrbing them makes the moments of passion all the better.
Definitely looking forward to part 7, as well as any other works you may produce.
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