The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mr. B
Unknown
Family Farm
The onset of puberty brings fast changes to a young teen.
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 macho
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Well written, and perfectly paced growth. Good description of growth and to the point. Fun read.
 Wolfme
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
I absolutely loved this story. I just hope that more people read and like it as much as I did so that you will carry on writing. I can't think of a single thing that would make this story better.
I am wondering if you will have any sex scenes, though. Obviously not within the family members as this maybe a little to dodgy to read.
Keep up the good work and I hope to be reading more very soon.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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