A witch turns Julie into a big titted bimbo.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.62
- BE: 3.92
- Characters: 4.38
- Technical: 4.54
Maser-Brain
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A great bimbofication story. I love the changes to Julie's wardrobe (oh god, that microskirt...) and Melinda having to explain how a blowjob works to her dimming mind was fantastic.
Dr. Love
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Awesome! Please write more.
Savagecabbage
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Loved it:) Look forward to seeing more of your work...hopefully longer!!!
ScramblerJ
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A great first tale. A little rushed at some points, but it was fun to see the high and mighty Julie lowered the bimbo level of Jewels. She sure is a much better gal to be around that Julie was!
-J-
daimon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
LOVED IT! Great bimboification!
sheetswa
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Napalm
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good story, short and sweet just how i like it. Keep it up.
razaksroughnecks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this one. Fun, quick and to the point. I wouldn't mind seeing more of these characters.
jamie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
G-man001
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A good, short quickie. The growth was a little rushed but I did enjoy the story. Now, go! Go and write more!
Mental
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well done. A short story but it flowed well and there was quite a bit of creative description that went the extra mile instead of just "good enough". Good writing quality in a general sense as well.
Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A very fun short. I liked the concept a lot. Can't help wondering what it might be like if it were a little more fleshed out and slowed down but still thanks!
Vengeance1701
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well-formatted and good quick fun:)
Quite enjoyed it!
Love to see what you could do with a bit more depth to things:)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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