The Overflowing Bra

You should not be writing for anyone.

What the Fuck is this happy horsesh*t!?! Got soft a quarter of the way in because the word use was horrible. Learn to type with dialogue to signify who is talking. Try reading an adult book, not out of the kiddy section at the library where you may spend most of your time looking at the patrons...
Sorry for raving on, but I am gravely disappointed that this story ever made it to post, TWICE?! Eat sh*t and Die!

Well, keep reading, and keep writing. This story could definitely use a rewrite, because you have a great idea here. It's just put together poorly. Russian Judge is right, you need some more practice, and a reference book will help you quite a bit.

Good story premise, but atrocious grammar.  

That was a good first try. The only bad thing about was really the grammar. You had WAY too many run-on sentences, and that killed it a bit for me. A few well-meaning commas wouldn't be out of place. As Long Dong Wang said, you messed up the quotes a little. place the quote, then space it. (i.e. "hello, John" not " hello, John") Word will mess it up. One last grammar thing; whenever a new person starts to speak, make it a new line.

The good news: in RTF form the story can be read by anybody.
The bad news: in RTF form the story can be read by anybody.
You really need to learn the basics. I understand that if you were taught in American schools, especially Florida ones, you may not have learned English. But you have to learn everything from the beginning.
Start with sentences, then paragraphs, and then whole stories. Along the way learn about characters and how to make them come alive. Your first reference book should be Strunk and White's "The Elements of Style." It is the simplest and best guide to writing available. Start there, keep writing, and come back in a few months.

I liked the way it started, but it got a little too crazy for me.  I guess, as a head-tramua-induced fantasy, it works, but I would have enjoyed it more if the story took more time to explore what was going on.  How much control does she have over her condition?  What caused her to lose control at the office?  What triggers it?  Why did she bring him home, if she wasn't interested in him before?
I did appreciate the little clues at the end; things not being where you remember them, the clock being wrong... the little things that can tell you you're dreaming.  (Because sometimes it is the little things like that, and not the mind-blowing sex with an incredibly growing woman.  Funny how that works.)  That was a nice touch, which was about enough to forgive you for using the "but it was only a dream" trope. ;)

I couldn't understand any of it. Please get help from a native English speaker.

it started to get confusing. i didnt exactly know which character was talking at sometime. it was a great story though. Good work =D