A Boyfriend/Girlfriend BE Story Collaboration. The first of what we hope to be many more to come. All notes welcomed.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.88
- Characters: 4.38
- Technical: 4.63
Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Well done. I look forward to more in the future.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Original story. I really like that you started w/ a a gal w/ DD's and a guy who hides his true desires. Good story. Appropriate length. Good job, keep it up!
AN ASS FULL OF POO
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Looks like you put some effort into it.
Nk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really like your story. It should be longer.
Keep up the great work, I hope you write another one soon.
Peace.
Vlad
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well played although I didn't expect it to become a sex scene so fast. I hope there's a second story.
Gman001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved it. I would have liked it to last longer and grow slower. But it was an awesome story. Actually part two sounds like I'd really like it as well. Keep it up!
GorpThorp
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Definitely a very well written story, and a BF/GF collaboration is intriguing as an author combo. My personal taste is for things to start small and end up around where Heather started, but that's personal preference and not something I can hold against any author.
I'm looking forward to the next one-
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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