The devilish being from the mysterious 5th dimension returns! The "Great" Gazoob has some fun fulfilling the deep seated desires of Mark, ranging from unreal breast growth to penis growth to big bellies to giantesses!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.83
Sparkish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
V!le
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
frank0127
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I absolutely loved this story, especially the ending! Would love to see more, even a sequel that picks up where this one leaves off!
G-man001
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Liked part one more. However, it's nice to see the belly get some love...a preg story next perhaps? Your additions to this arcive always welcome.
tusdine
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fun story, although I have to admit that I liked the original one a little more! However - I do like that the characters are actually developed in this one. I also preferred the ending to the first story with the four ladies, but that's just me thinking "the more the merrier." :) I hope you continue to write this series.
namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
great story, with a few interesting twists and narrative ideas.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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