The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nicknak
Intergalactic Gas Station
My very first story.

Where do aliens get fuel for their space craft? What would the use? Kayla, a busty blonde girl gets the shock of her happy little life when she is out jogging one day.

Average Scores:

OmniTrixie
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

It's a straight weight-gain story with some breast size increase from the extra poundage and a little lactation thrown in at the end. If that's what you're looking for...

Mopey
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

It is a shame that the file format is dominating this conversation. The story itself has pretty minimal BE description, but it is technically well written. I enjoyed the lack of typos.
Please please take a look at PDFComplete, an open-source PDF printer for Windows, or use one of the GhostScript converters for Linux.
Also, zamzar.com is an online file converter that works well.

Wild Card
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Come on people, stop reviewing and rating a story you didn't read!
And yes that DOES also apply to all you douchebags who could not open the file and actually read it!

If you ever wonder why people hesitate to post and upload and share the stories, being turned down is one of them and your rating methods don't help a bit.

Yes the poster should have used an other more "compatible" file format. Plain simple notepad for all I care, But he didn't... Did he get flamed for it! He did with the first rating he got.

Where the additional rating needed.. There where not!

A little bit of google power, two easy picked search words, "wps" and "converter" and tonz of solutions.


Now on to the rating of this story.
Its an good story, here and there some odd words I could see fit of its use, but that might be my lack of English Reading/Understanding.

The story had a really good start, one that could go all directions.
yet it had a odd (but still good) twist to it at the end.

I found the beginning of the story, well detailed and most enjoyable.

Overall Enjoyment: 4
BE Description: 3
Characters: 2
Technical Quality: 2
(Why I 5 star rate your story? To undo some of the damage them douchebags done to your true rating)

fox_drifter
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Pretty excellent little story! Would have loved more detail in the expansion, but still a fun read. And we always need more FA. :)

It isn't a great format to post in, admittedly, but it's your first time posting. .rtf is usually a good, simple format that everyone can read.

Whacky Iraqi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It opened fine for me. GREAT story!

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