TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Uploaded by Genoharden; found on Expansion Stories?
Part 3 of Spiders! Enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 5.00
HeLin
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
All of my questions seskhed-tlantt!
konser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it! Plain and simple! And hey, I found this on expansion stories, so there may be a part 4 floating around there somewhere just waiting to be found!
Dave
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yet another intriguing installment. You're starting to move into the 'realization' stage of the horror now, and it's ratcheting up the tension while maintaining the fascination. Poor Cona, and yet - much of the horror for her (for now) has probably got to be how her body is reacting with arousal to the very things that her mind is finding strange and scary.
Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Once again, a great read. It may be horror, it may be breast expansion, it may even be considered excessive lactation. But you've got me on the hook, and I urge you to finish writing the next part. You end on such cliff-hangers, you kill me a bit inside as a reader. But honestly, great writing and hope the story continues. 5 Stars all around.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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