Ignore growth-pill warning labels at your own peril! This is my first attempt at erotic fiction, so forgive me if my writing is not in line with this website's usual standards.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.57
- Characters: 1.71
- Technical: 3.43
Megamelonomaniac
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Thanks for the feedback, guys (and girls if there are any out there.) As the title suggests, I was trying to write a story of pure BE action with no backstory, character description or development, to see how well it would work in this genre. I guess the results aren't to everyone's taste but Foxdrifter understands what I was trying to achieve. Thanks again--MMM.
[BTW, I had to rate my own story in order to make this post, so I have given myself the average scores so far.]
foxdrifter
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I'm a little biased, since I love multibreast and it is amazingly rare, but I felt it was pretty damn good for what it was. A quick, intensely fetish-focused writing. I think you pulled off exactly what you went for, so kudos.
BrainDrain
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I liked the BE. Even though it was quick, the fact that there was multibreast BE made it better.
Professor Grow
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
It is indeed short, but that's not always a bad thing. I would suggest that you take a bit more time with the descriptions in your next story. Short is okay, rushed isn't. I liked the fact that they didn't have names, it was an interesting choice.
fourshot
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
well written although charicter development is a must. Don't get discouraged! It is an excellent first attempt! work on your storylines. and I'm sure your second attempt will bee much improved.
Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
There's no setup for this story; you didn't even bother to give either of the characters names. She reads the warning, and then immediately disregards it? It seems more like a flood of half-formed dream images than an actual narrative.
puchu
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
This story goes too quick too fast.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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