The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Happy Birthday Nikki
Samantha gets her boyfriend a special set of birthday presents which slowly turn Nicholas into a buxom, submissive Nikki.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Not bad. Can't wait for the next - and hopefully, longer - sequel.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The only problem that came up over and over was your use of the word "to" instead of "too." If something is in excess, we use the word "too." Such as, my explanation of your grammar was too long, instead I should be telling people how much I liked it.

It's short, too the point, and worth reading no doubt.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I enjoyed this very much - especially when he so re-occupied that he hadn't noticed his tits had grown so big. Yes we need a sequel - please.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

wow fantastic TG story with a little bit more elaboration on the transformation details(i.e. feelings from the main characters perspective)you could make a great sequel or simliarly themed story.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Longer! Great!!!

Do another one! Maybe a little hesitency/unsure-of-himself on his part would be a good touch.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Really great, though I almost wish it had been at least partly NC. I agree it was much too short though, and some more detail w/ the BE would've been nice as well.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

this was a great story! i would love to read a 2nd like this. i agree that it was too short

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Really enjoy TG stories, especially BE ones. I really enjoyed it, but i think you could have dragged it out more and added more into it. It all occurred too quickly. But definitely enjoyable, I look forward to more.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It's hard to find a good TG story ever since fictionmania went under... I'm glad the genre is still alive!

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