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The Overflowing Bra

The Bustiest League (Edited)
A few glitches in the last chapter of the original "Bustiest League" story forced me to reload the story here.

As stated before, this story took over two years to write, and it is as epic in scale as the time it took to write it. The author sincerely hopes you will enjoy the story in the spirit it was written. Part fanfic, part superhero tale, and just the right amount of BE, this story redefines the superhero genre by taking seven BE-capable superheroes and asking the question: "What would you do with the power to cause breast expansion?" Jennifer Love Hewitt, my favorite actress of all time, makes a cameo, of course. This story is an homage to all my friends at the Overflowing Forum, the forum on this very site.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'm sorry you got so many negative comments, I really liked it!

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I gave you all middle ratings. This is not because I liked or disliked it. Quite frankly, I didn't read it. I just noticed I was in it, and I looked through it on a word search for my name. Everyone is saying using these likenesses is not cool. After a quite browse, I don't rightly mind.

I, however, will not read this as, first and foremost, I hate DC. Secondly, of the few people in the JLA I do like, Green Lantern is by far not one of them. Not your fault. I read many comics, but if I see a cape I immediately turn off to it (that's an expression for a type of comic, as I am aware Green Lantern doesn't wear a cape).

I can't vouch for the others in this story, but knowing a few I'm sure they won't be overly pissed. Maybe just a bit weirded out as I was.

...Oh, and I have never nor will ever be involved in the military. I have family defending my country, yes, but good GOD is it not for me.

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

If you are going to post a comment, post something that is beneficial to the author. Negative comments are immature and unimportant. If you want to give something a '1' give reason to make it better, otherwise you are wasting everyone's time including your own, oh wait, I forgot, you hate yourself.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Hey look he wrapped up garbage with a golden ribbon! GJ making up for bad writing w/pretty formatting. Totally made this worth re-reading.


Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Although I don't condone using other people's names without permission, this story isn't as bad as everyone is saying. You went for a comic book feel and that's what I got out of it. This must not be the best place to post a "comicy" story though. Either way, kudos to you for working so long and hard on it, I for one enjoyed the childish humor and over the top narration.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

This is still the same amateurish, boring, and nonsensical story you originally posted. It's still not at all worth reading.

Seriously, this is not good. I'm being completely honest. If you really spent two years on it you wasted a whole lot of time.

ugh ugh
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Better format. Same weak story.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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