In a world of superheroes, Tracy is hypnotized by a supervillian, but that won't stop her from finally beginning to enjoy her own powers.. +Thanks for any comments.+
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.60
Anonymous Coward
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A well-written, fun, and sexy story. Thanks!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Very exciting. I especially liked the part in her condo. Incredible.
harl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
really a great story. I like the twist taken by the plot. anxious to get part three...
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Pure awesome. Do want more.
Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
You ended this with the statement "This was deffinately going to be fun". I couldn't agree more. Great job and nice descriptions. Looking forward to the next installment.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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