Calvin meets a Genie and makes the customary three wishes.
A short short story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.81
- BE: 1.63
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 3.19
unfamous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
And I am the only person who caught the Fallout 3 reference.
Yummm
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I'm sure I've seen some part of this one somewhere else.
Anon-e-moose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Did you just flip us off, Bill? lol
SMAP
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
I saw how short it was and immediately realized it was gonna be trash. But then, reading the story on something of a whim, I lol'd. "...By some COBOL-coding motherfuckers!" really brought things home- I'd have to say, without that it'd just be a poor throwaway joke, but as is I enjoyed it.
Don't mind the haters, they just don't know a playa's gotta do what a playa's gotta do.
Leviathan
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Hahahaha. Good joke man. I laughed pretty good. These other joes need a sense of humor. It's a joke people, chill out.
MissanH
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Sorry piece of crap, and should be deleted from the site. When it's a real story, it could be reposted
[YOUR NAME HERE]
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Wow - this is a first for me. I'm always excited to see a new Pratt story, and seeing this one had been posted was no exception. And then, I read it [cringe]. Did some 12 year old post this and put Pratt's name on it? It is just some random sentences strung together? I don't get it...
Oh ...
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Gerdes
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Ridiculous, pointless, and not worth the five seconds it took to read.
poopwich
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
It's definitely worth the download, it's funny, not really abe story but it's funny so I like it.
Fox
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Amusing, not what I expected but amusing none the less. BE in one sentence gets you a 2, it was there but not really. Could be a great short story concept.
buddyu
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
This was an idea for a story not one itself.
Paul Cullen
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
This felt like a story fragment. I feel like there was a lot of potential for story development here that was just wasted.
Guy Incognito
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Very short, not exactly much in terms of plot or story, even BE. Not up to Bill Pratt snuff by any stretch of the imagination.
XW
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nothing like what Bill Pratt usually produces but it was a nice change of pace that I found hilarious.
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