Here's the .txt, uploaded by anon
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 2.67
- Technical: 3.33
XXXecil
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It has most of the basic elements I like. But my suspension of disbelief was difficult because there was no real attempt to justify or explain how such vast changes and sensitivty to the owner's thoughts was possible.
Jwargod
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Liked the transformation, but the story just made it pointless that the character use to be a man. Even then, the "mind trap" idea just further enforces the point (of lack thereof) of "why bother" with a character's backstory and just use the extra writing for what you were really aiming for.
e
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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