The Overflowing Bra

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Jake may deserve a medal for his creation, but you deserve a medal, personal harem (fembot or human), and a damn galaxy named in your honor for this story. I broke into laughter with every joke, was on the edge of my seat with the more "suspenseful" scenes, and admired the extent of moral questioning that went into all of it.
I mean yeah, the actual growth of breasts here needs some more description to it (I'm lost as to breast sizes in relation to everyone by the end of the story) but then again, your writing style is captivating enough to drive the story without it.
Summary: This is the overflowingbra equivalent of Watchmen.

This was a great story! Book II continued right where Book I left off and I found the characters very entertaining. Can't wait for Book III!

Wow. THANK YOU

great one of the best
one question: What was that last line about?
I had to do a double take, is it a hint at what is to come?
something evil or just plain perverse?

Like you say, it is very long, which I didn't mind, but some parts still seemed rushed. Adding new characters is fine, but we didn't really get to know the existing ones. I did read it all, and enjoyed it very much. The standard of writing is very high,I love your humour and the story idea is great, so I hope you can branch off into new directions without going right over the edge into parody.

At this point, you should think about what kind of writer you want to be.
I reached roughly halfway and stopped reading. You executed perfect prose and pace and embedded abundant erotica, but where can I find the struggle? It seems that the story becomes increasingly fantastic; the barriers blocking Jake from his goals last pitifully short periods of time, causing Jake to become unsurprisingly more and more full of himself. If I missed the antagonist(s) from the second half, then you must provide such a preview of the confrontation earlier in the text. If you read/watch practically any masterpiece of storytelling, you will find clear examples of people or things that challenge the main characters. Who would care about David if Goliath was a joke?
You know how to deliver a story from the recesses of your mind (and you have a superlative vocabulary), but I think your problem lies in generating a story. You must challenge your characters--if not, they will find no need to develop and adapt, and if you fall into creating static characters, then you will bore your reader.

Absolutely excellent. By far the best I have seen here. Keep up the good work! 

It is very rare when you're compelled to read a story beyond a bunch of BE and oral sex that's on Overflowing Bra. Fantastic work and I look forward to the next part. 

Yet another amazing story, just as good if not better than Part 1.
I actually enjoyed reading about the character's moral choices, and the many ponderings on the meaning of freedom, which i must say, one does NOT expect to see in a porn story.

Wow! Fantastic continuation to the original story. I really enjoy the humor and characters. A very entertaining read. Will there be a nemesis in the story? Will perhaps Jake need some protector Fembots to guard him? Inquiring minds want to know. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Great story, on many levels.  'Course with my proclivities, with this technology, I'd turn into the Hulk and nail an army of She-Hulks, but each to their own.  Perhaps some twit could steal the tecnology and do just that, and have to be stopped --- after a while.
On a serious note, for a committed Darwinist, the protagonist of this story is well on his way to recreating the Biblical story of Ecclesiastes --- the tale of the man who has "everything" of this world.

Great work.  I look forward to Book III

Sir I have scarcely read a tenth of this as well as the first one and already I have to say that THIS IS POSSIBLY THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING THAT IF HAVE EVER READ!

Fantastic work. Loved the first volume and so happy to see the second. Keep it up!

Now *that* was something I wasn't expecting. The BE was limited (and off-screen), but BE doesn't make for the only thing. I loved how the story progressed and developed. Some of the scenes did feel a bit rough and a bit uncomfortable (like your characters had mused, psuedo-rape is something definitely an awkward situation). And the ending. Oh. My. Goodness. The humor did definitely keep the situation light as this one tended to be the more broody, insightful, and thought-provoking book in this series. It will be interesting to see where Book 3 will take them.