In a far future breeding program, two exceptionally gifted individuals find something akin to love. But really it's just an excuse for lots of breast expansion, milk, and extreme intercourse. Fun times for all.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.58
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Super hot and sexy!! My only complaint was the dudess orgasm. Did he feel any pleasure? You described everything technical about it, but no enjoyment? Only the girl seemed to enjoy it.
DarkChick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You took all of my favorite kinks and jammed them all into a wonderfully written story. It was good and long too! Ive come back to read this story 5 times now and every time its like reading it for the first time! I loved the whole "sci fi" feel to it, and outrageous proportions are always fun. This story is so full of win, it almost hurts. Darkchick demands moar plz.
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Man, that was an awesome story. Hopefully, the future turns out like this.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
You use big words.
Me like.
duffdog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The subject you have chosen is excellent and is one of my personal favorites. I hope that you will continue to write more and more about this bizarre futureworld as it is very interesting and fresh.
The Doob
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
An excellent piece of writing from the technical standpoint, and (despite what others may say while espousing personal tastes as an indicating factor of rating in regards to the subject matter) a fine piece of work for the genres you set out to cover. So why not all 5's? Because, sadly, you let pretentiousness mar the setting. People who enjoy these things -know- that it's fantasy. Giving a lecture on milk ducts as a preliminary science lesson in an attempt to to set a "tone" for a story has just made you come off as pompous. In the future, keep in mind that it's great to have a more "Factual" writing style when approaching the fantasy, but don't try and talk down on other writers via a lecture on anatomy. It's unappealing, pointless, and completely out of tune with the whole reason people are reading your story on this website in the first place.
anon
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
What happened to in vitro fertilization? Regardless, it wasn't my style and too much fixation on the male organ.
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it, but I think it needed more detailed BE, less MPG. I'm not much of a fan of people being used as lab rats, though.
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice work. Well thought out background and good flow of story.
First Rating Just For This
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Gentlemen,
I pronounce this to be win of the highest quality.
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome. Instant classic. Please continue to write!
Kisame17
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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