The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
The Awakening
Fantasy involving multiple women and vast breasts. Another masterpiece from Steve Palmer.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Nice and simple, and sweetly innocent

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

great story it pulled me into it :D

bear chives
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

lovely story. i don't know what happened to Tom, but i'm not that disappointed not konwing. something wonderful happened to him and I'm glad to know all about it.

Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I liked it.

Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

An excellent story hampered by a poor choice of file format. If you need to have illustrations, use a format that is not platform-specific, such as PDF, or just include jpeg/gif/pngs along with your plain html file. Back on the story tho - very little actual BE in it, but still a good read. You had a great way of making it feel like a dream, and did a good job of convincing me that the main character was confused but not entirely.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

How about a format that non-microsoft people can read? mhtml as an attachment doesn't count.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

bravo..please submit more!

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 1

had to reformat it to open it, with odd characters in place of apostrophes and quotation marks

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