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Fantasy involving multiple women and vast breasts. Another masterpiece from Steve Palmer.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.38
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.75
Barcelona
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice and simple, and sweetly innocent
billoon29
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
great story it pulled me into it :D
bear chives
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
lovely story. i don't know what happened to Tom, but i'm not that disappointed not konwing. something wonderful happened to him and I'm glad to know all about it.
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
An excellent story hampered by a poor choice of file format. If you need to have illustrations, use a format that is not platform-specific, such as PDF, or just include jpeg/gif/pngs along with your plain html file. Back on the story tho - very little actual BE in it, but still a good read. You had a great way of making it feel like a dream, and did a good job of convincing me that the main character was confused but not entirely.
mtb
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
How about a format that non-microsoft people can read? mhtml as an attachment doesn't count.
fourshot
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
bravo..please submit more!
Milkthusiast
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
had to reformat it to open it, with odd characters in place of apostrophes and quotation marks
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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