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The Overflowing Bra

notsosupersaiyan
n_s_ssj@yahoo.com
The Corset's Curse
Some corsets enhance the figure more than others...
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 HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Inflation flotation... My favorite.
 Very Free
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Abruptly changes to another person, and we don't find out what happened to the main character.  But is anyone into this kind of inflation stuff?  She was really heavy in the stairwell, then she turned into a feather.  Why?  Needs more BE.  
 Griles
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
urk..balloons, hurk, not..my..thing.  Otherwise not bad, but er, yes
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