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Oxriff
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Sexified - Chapter VI: A Whole New Level!
The Sexified stories tell the story of a former secretary, Rachel, who after being subjected to a cruel experiment gains the ability to transform into the “stunning sex goddess” Elle whenever she gets horny! This is a sequel to “Sexified V: Paradise”, taking place just a few weeks after those events: The government wants payback and will stop at nothing to recapture her!

I missed writing these stories and Amix’s take (Sexified: Rachel’s Legacy) made me think of other scenarios after Part V: Paradise. Enjoy, and please leave a comment. It sucks to see thousands of downloads but only a handful of comments for each story. Also feel free to write more stories based on this universe. Enjoy ;)  
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Harl
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

You want'em? Wou'll have them.

I did't like it: Sexified ended its way, and you didn't add anything. Like a crappy sequel of a great movie. Good writing anyway.

sonic_at
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A very good read. Maybe i read to many stories but i was kinda expecting the unsuspected twist in the plot all of the time. Still enjoyed very much. Ty : )

Oh-Sai
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Other than a few typos ("here" instead of "her", for example), another outstanding story from you, Oxriff! The ending was out of control.. wished for a bit more detail in the growth and such, but it's minor (this is a BE website, of course! :D).

Glad to see you're still around!

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