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Italian folklore meets a Sorcerer's Apprentice variant. Will Our Hero be able to stop his girlfriend's breast growth before things get out of hand?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.50
- BE: 1.50
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.50
Genoharden
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It just seemed.... lacking. Not much BE nor much else. Character dialogue was of the standard variety, as were the characters themselves.
A few years ago, this may have been a little better praised, but nowadays, you've got to bring out your inner... well, let's call them "desires."
A. Guy
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Interesting idea, though I'll readily admit I found it severely lacking in the BE department. It came down to a nice mysterious story framework written in good english and in a kind-of diary style, with sadly little else than ("off-screen") bra-size letters counting. Could use a lot more fleshing out. The way it is now, it's little more than a scribble to start building on. Might have to do with it being from 2002, as the file date suggests? An early work, perchance?
Just my 2c, of course.
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