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This is it. The epic love story by the recently retired master of BE literature, Greapos. It's the classic and tragic tale of a husband who finds himself (and his friend) mysteriously shrinking while his gorgeous and loving wife (and her friends, indeed all the women of the world) seem to be mysteriously growing taller and more voluptuous.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.54
- BE: 4.54
- Characters: 4.85
- Technical: 4.92
Dr. G
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Too good, this is actually a good story. That is far and few in this seedy little section of writing.
Lolmaster
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice work, my speculation is that all the girls in this story, with the possible exception of Cindi, are invited by Denise
gtsfan087
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
i love it so far. don't stop writing. i want to see how this ends. all your stories so far are incredible. ^_____^
namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
EtherealVision
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow... I sure hope that there ends up being another!
MrHHH
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Reuploaded a fixed version of the story. No more bizarre markings.
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Had a little trouble following dialogue with the lack of quotations marks, but that may be my word processor's fault.
I agree with Spork that the actually size ratios were a bit up for guessing, especially when his friend was there too.
But other than that, a beautiful story.
Alain Connu
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Spork
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very, very well done story. No doubt took lots of time and work to be what it is today. I do have a few things I would like to bring up though...
Mainly, when Rob was shrinking, you gave very few indexes to how tall he was. It would be mentioned here or there, but we were often left in the dark. Maybe you could include some more numbers so we the reader get an idea of how small he is. Or when you say his wife was growing taller, maybe how much taller? It would just help me out, and I'm sure many other people.
Anyway, that little thing aside, excellent work, one of the best stories I've read on this site by far.
De Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I can't even read it. it's riddled with these ? things where " should be, and my document program can't replace them. I'm a little picky with this sort of thing
Beetlebomb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Alexander Peabody
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
They don't write thim like this anymore.
Kowalski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It simply doesn't get any better than this.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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