Gerald gets off campus for a look around at the city and a night out on the town.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.83
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 4.17
- Technical: 4.00
The_Fedora
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I know by now that your style is go long on the sexiness but short on the sex itself so I won't ask you to change it. It's hot, it works. As always, I enjoy the multi-perspective sections. All I'll ask for is more BE ('cause you're damn good at it). And a good BE gal doesn't unbutton her shirt. Her expanding tits pop off the buttons, it bursts at the seams, or she rips it off herself.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best chapter yet! Very clever twists. Wonder if he would lose control of his powers when drunk? Certainly his inhibitions. This ranks up there with Melissa 2.0/3.0 and is a fitting homage to the original story.
CitizenFree
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
You are an amazing author! Just the right mix of storyline and BE. Can't wait for another.
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a great work, please continue.
wildcard
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I don't know if I should be rating this story (this series of story) good or bad.
I can't keep track of whats happening, its all very confusing. My English isn't my main language so this might be the reason why I can't keep track of whats going on.
If a 4th part would be released I'm pritty sure I'm not gonna read it, for I can't quite follow the first 3 to start with.
Bob Twilliger
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
shame about the MM tag added
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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