The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Remake, Part I
After an encounter with aliens, Gerald finds himself blessed with the Reward an of an Alien's Gift.
Average Scores:

Mopey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story reminds me why I am and will continue to be a Bill Pratt fanboy.

JustAFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is more of a thank you then a review. I only de-lurk to review something when I realy love it. This story has some of the most fun BE/MC content I've read in a long time. I realy hope you keep it going. Only complaint is that a little more description of the BE would have been nice (I never realy got a good sence of when her final size was).

xarinth
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I agree with "B", there could be a little more description of the BE, but I liked it overall. Can't wait to see what you do next.

The Immortal
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome. It gives me some ideas.

Roid Head
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

I enjoyed this very much; one thing that these stories often lack is male changes. I mean, who wants to be a skinny nerd fucking a goddess? Make the guy a complete physical stud who can fuck mutiple women to ruin and make footstools of his enemies.

Vlad
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I am a huge fan of the Alien's Gift stories. I can not wait to see what you do with the idea.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great job with the story. I can't wait to read the next part.

B
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

My only complaint (and it is very minor) is that the chapter could be longer and have a little more description of the main character and the BE. I can't wait for the next part!

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