The Overflowing Bra

At least the author knew how to use a spell checker, that's a huge improvement over the usual fucktarditry here.
The story itself wasn't interesting or entertaining, and the plot made about as much sense as a Three Stooges Short.

Enjoyment is limited because the BE is of the one cupsize one moment and another cupsize the next variety. Worse, the author needs to do basic research into how breasts are sized because the measurements used describe fat women, not particularly busty ones. 
Nothing else stands out as particularly good or bad.

Very nice. Needs more description as well as character development, but like i said very nice. The ideas are all in the right place now they just need a little expanding on grammatically and BAMM, instant winer.

Great Story, I really liked it. 
The characters where oke, the only description given about one of the characters was Freedom, her bust size.
I'm not saying thats a bad thing, because it allows the reader to fill in the blanks of how the characters look, skin tone, hair and eye color height, body build etc. etc.
I feel that, if a bit more details where given about the two characters in the story, the overal likeability of the characters would have bin alot better. 
The BE description of the transformation. It wasn't bad, but it could have bin better. I felt the descriptions where on fast forward, Starting size discription, grow grow grow, end size discription. I felt that the growth description could have bin more enjoyable if it was more in slow motion. This applies to alot of stories I read here, so not just yours. By adding alot of details, the actual growth proces could still be fast, but because the reader is reading alot of details of what is happening he will experiancing more of a slow motion effect, what I personaly find more pleasing to be reading.
Looking forward on the next part/chapter of this story. 

The content was great and overall I liked the story but the descriptions could have been better.