Sally and Amy have been drifting apart. Amy's too busy with work and Sally's feeling lonely. She wants to do something special for their one year anniversary that will help bring them back together. Thankfully, Sally finds a shop with the right kind of lingerie. The kind that enhances a woman's curves in all the right places. Both women are in for a great surprise, and a magical night.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.80
ScarletJ
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed the bond that the characters had, nicely tied into the story and the characters were nicely thought out. The BE has been improved but might want to make the senquence a bit longer. Overall was a pleasure to read and you write a hell of a nice "teasing" story, please keep it up! ^_^
The_Specialist
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great. Finally, a good story between two women. Good character development. Maybe a little more detail, a little more expansion would have helped. Overall though, hope the series keeps going. One story where someone finally does not throw themselves into the story as a guy, and all they talk about is the sex part between guy and girl. We need description, and you are on to something here. Love the characters.
Adama
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I like how romantically sweet these two stories are. Makes a nice change from the usual kind of thing.
I think both the character and BE depictions have improved with this story over the previous one.
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
HeliumGirl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Sometimes the flow of the narrative gets interrupted by those brief one or two sentences about mundane things. Otherwise, a good story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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