Part one of a bodyshifters epic. Alien women with incredible powers are giving all men everywhere the sex of their wildest dreams, but when an old friend sends one of his harem as a gift, a dark and disturbing discovery is made by a lonely Shifter outcast. Will the newcomers to the harem disrupt their lives of mind-boggling pleasure? What sexy, big-busted secrets lie behind, The Vegas Strain?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.86
- BE: 3.86
- Characters: 4.14
- Technical: 2.57
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Wonderful descriptions and story. HORRIBLE formatting. I had to turn a 69 page story in word into a 14 page Word document.
oren
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Apple
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
Again I almost didn't read it due to whatever happened to the formating. But I'm with Josh, word is fine (aslong as it isn't 2007) you can down load a free reader from microsoft or almost every text editer higher then wordpad can read word files. Including Open Office which is FREE!
But as for the story Its nice to see some advancement in the BSU. Keep it up. (FYI YOU can email Mr. HHH with the fixed version of part one and he'll replace it with this file and it'll keep the downloads and stuff.)
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Much more of the same BSU, AKA average Joe meets the Impossible Dream for endless sex. But, as Kanodin said, the format was messed up- no paragraphs. Contrary to Josh's advice, authors should mot distribute stories as a .DOC (MS Word) because many people don't have Microsoft Word. Better to save it as a .RTF or .PDF, which gives the author more control over the document, how it looks and locking the content.
Josh
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Would have been better if written in Word or not only having 5-7 words per line
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
I like this story because it stands apart from the other Body-Shifter stories in a unique way. This particular segment features a Body-Shifter that is acutely unhappy with her (?) situation. Usually Body-Shifters have a mindless drive to split/reproduce, but this story is taking a realistic angle by creating discontent and rival relationships.
However, the formatting of the story was absolutely horrible (or was it just me???). It is difficult to identify where the paragraphs began or ended. The punctuation was not coded properly, making technical corrections almost impossible to make.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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