The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Skippycheese
The Slut's Panties
This is chapters 1-4 of The Slut's Panties.

I hope you enjoy. Read the notes before each chapter for a quick overview.
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 mafia
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
very good story loved the attention to detail
 SavageCabbage
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Well written,good descriptions and content. I'd like to read more!
 myobpolo
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
I really enjoyed your story.  I hope you continue it. If you do continue I hope she keeps her body hoping and body changing powers.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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