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The Overflowing Bra

I acknowledge that I have not had any contribution towards this story, save for seeming to have kept it longer than anyone else, if you wrote it then you have my heartfelt thanks, this story opened my eyes to a world of BE. So now I give back to the community, the story that captured this weirdoes imagination.

MadMacs2010 – BEen a fan for a long time

Bathtime fun with the shower hose has some surprising and fun results - or do they...?
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

My oldest will be in 3rd grade and my mdldie child (son) starts Kindergarten this fall too ALL DAY! They changed it after my oldest went to Kindergarten. 1/2 was great it really got me transitioned as a mom for my child to start school daily. But ALL DAY? I think this will also take me some getting used to.HINT: Pack lunches the night before buy GoGurts freeze them and when you pack them the night before, by the time they get to the school cafeteria for lunch they are unfrozen but still cold. (I know very random to add this to my comment but someone told me about this when my daughter started eating lunch at school and I LOVED the advice LOL)

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

nice :-)

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

not bad, but a bit overused.

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Meh. I opened it fine, but .txt or even .htm would have been better.

Story seemed a little disjointed, and short. The fact that she was going to try her "bathtime games" fully clothed kind of confused me, too. I was also a little put off by the "explosion point" thing- I'm glad that she woke up before that happened.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Kind of bland. The whole 'it was all a dream' angle is so cliche', it's painful.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Sorry to lower the rating even further, but I also wasn't able to open this up using Internet Explorer. I got a very strange coded version of it that I could read bits and pieces of it using wordpad/notepad, but that was all.

I do appreciate your effort though, whoever you are, by adding this story to for those that are able to read it.

Hope to see a compatible version very soon! Thank you


John Bauer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of my favorite stories from years gone by, the other being the girl with the bathtime fun with the hose and nozzle fun on her nipples. Agreed on the format, MHT is something that is unique, just save as a .doc or .txt, don't need any fancy html textfile.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

The file worked fine for me, Jayessell. It opened up in Explorer.....

Anyways, it's a pretty good story, short and sweet.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Sorry to skew the rating, but please post in an approved format.

.txt .pdf .rtf .htm

As you can see by the calendar, it's F'ing 2008.

People don't want to download strange files from unknown sources any longer.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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