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A British schoolgirl with an ill-fitting uniform has her self-esteem improved by her teacher.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.38
- Technical: 4.63
 BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
Short and sweet.  Not really BE, and no sex.
 brianm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
An absolute classic! Thanks!
 Smash
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Superb! Considering the phrase, a picture is worth a thousand words; in the case of this story - I quite like the words and the mental pictures you create. Thank you.
 BIG H
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
ITS ONE OF THE BEST STORYS OF HAVE COME ACROSS . I HOPE YOU DO MORE OF THIS STORY. 
 The Snake in the Empty Bottle
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I can not quite put my finger on it.  I love this story. I need to find me such a goddess.  Really good! Thank-you.
 Irrelevent 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Engaging and tasteful, fantastic work.
 Steve Jobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
One of my all time favorites.
 Big dog
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
A pretty godd story overall
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