Sara Pinter is approached by a shapeshifter who has an unusual request. This story was first posted on 4chan's /d/. There are three chapters.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.88
- Technical: 4.88
xtra123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wish there was more to go along with this one...
cellss01
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
We need more stories like this one, great stuff grotto.
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Do hope you decide to write more of this. It feels like it could become something really great.
Phill
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! Please write more!!!
horse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
very good. please write more. the act being in complete self control is awesome
dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I rely like it i cant what for the next one plz rite it soon
there just isnt anof ppl riating stoys like this
None
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! It feels like a great set-up for an amazing story. I hope you continue!
Moot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great start, but let's see some plot!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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