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A biochemist uses her boyfriend's time machine to go back and give herself bigger tits.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.40
- BE: 2.60
- Characters: 3.40
- Technical: 3.20
Laplace
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Really...a good starting plot but the forced "comical" situation and back and forward of chapter in senseless order completely ruined it...
Scotto
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wasn't really good for what I wanted. It was a well written story, humourous at times, but a little disjointed.
Wolf
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
It was really good but it could do with more description of the be!!!
I like the humour keep at it
tsokei
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great work, great humor and varied descriptions of moments of BE.
RTPerson
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Too disjointed. Too many gaps for even a Memento-style method of plot development.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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